Quick write

Everyday we do a quick write and some of us likes to post them on our blogs. Our teacher sends us 2 prompts from pobble and then we would write our own story's on a google docs. Each day we do a new one we go to the very top and write it there. That way it's easy for us and the teacher.

Can you Write 2 or more WTE sentences?

Date: Monday 30th March 2020

Goal: Write 2x or more WTE sentences

Prompt: http://www.pobble365.com/animal-town/

Story starter :

Most visitors are a little shocked (to put it mildly) when they arrive at Animal Town. Despite the fact that the name of the town gives a slight indication to passers-by that the inhabitants of the town are ‘not normal’, it’s as if people don’t believe things until the see them with their own eyes!

Once you get used to being in Animal Town – or so they say – seeing an orangutan behind a desk in a sheriff’s office and upholding the law to an impeccably high standard becomes relatively ‘normal’…

Imagine you are a visitor in Animal Town. Try to describe your experience.

My story :

Most of the visitors were in shock and some were excited. Standing there mouths wide open wondering why animals would be in town. Each and every day a bus full of animals would arrive in town and kids would enjoy their company. Soon enough before anyone could think twice the town was called animal town. Almost every adult in animal town would want to talk to the Chief. The next day another bus full of animals arrived. Kids would run over and pat them while their parents stood their arms folded and looking quite angry. Later that day at about 12:00 one family was having a chat about staying or leaving. Ten minutes later they had made their minds up, they started packing everything and drove off to another town. But the second town they went to also had animals. They turned their car around and went back to animal town. When they arrived back at animal town they 

were - embarrassed, ashamed, fooled - as they entered their house. People and families started to buy animals for the good of their kids and because of the animals. Like where would the animals sleep. On the road? Yeah nah not on my watch. What would happen to them if a car comes? They're probably dead. Surprisingly the chief actually let them adopt/buy animals. Parents and kids were very happy and everyone thought that animal town wasn’t so bad after all. Well that was what everyone had thought but no they were wrong. Everyone except for one person …